About The Broken Ones

Hi, everyone who's following my little project called The Broken Ones. I would appreciate a response to what I have written and put up on the blog, so I'll know if you want me to continue. If you could type a few lines to tell me what were your favorite and least favorite chapter and why?
So far I've come half way through the story, and it will get even better at least that is my opinion. What do you think so far? What do you like about my story? Is it the characters or where the story takes place?
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The bird on the picture is a blackbird.